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What you ought NEVER to do in your essays for this class:

  • Use "you," "the reader," or "one" because you are assuming that any possible reading will have the same opinion that you are presenting

  • Use "I" or "me" unless you are using personal experience to back up your argument(s)

  • Use "I believe" or "I think" because those phrases allow you to hedge your arguments instead of just saying "this is so"

  • Use contractions because they are informal language structures

  • Use questions because you, as the writer, should be answering questions not asking them

  • Use the phrase "the fact that" because it is just extra wordage

  • Use the words "thing," "some," or "many" when you should name the object particularly

  • Use "there is/are" or "it is/are" because in using this sentence structure you are avoiding clearly signaling to your reader who/ what is the subject of your sentence 

 


 

What you ought ALWAYS to do in your essays for this class:

  • Use commas after  introductory clauses, connecting two independent clauses, and with items in a series

  • Look up any questions you may have about parenthetical documentation or grammar in The Writer's Reference

  • Talk to me regarding things you are unsure about

 


For more general advice please see the Essay Structure Page.