Introduction

• Underline the thesis

• Does it have all of the four parts (topic, argument, subtopics, and what's the point)?

• Does the thesis include both the broad topic and the specific experience?

• Is the introduction the right length for the paper?

• Is there a title and does it fit the paper?

Body Paragraphs

• How many body paragraphs are there?

• Underline each of the topic and concluding sentences.

• Do the topic and concluding sentences relate directly back to the subtopics that were expressed in the thesis?

• Do the body paragraphs deviate from the plan laid out by the thesis either through the addition of other subtopics or the subtraction of existing subtopics?

• Do each of the body paragraphs make the argument expressed in the thesis through the narrative experience?

• Do the body paragraphs contain detailed descriptions that show rather than tell? Are there places where the writer ought to use more description?

Conclusion

• Is there a conclusion paragraph?

• Does it restate the thesis with a difference in the first sentence?

• Does the last sentence take the topic out a broader level?

• Is the conclusion the right length?

In General

• Is the paper totally in the right format?

• Is the paper the right length (some on the third page)?

• Does the paper make a convincing argument

• Are there some parts of the paper that seem unnecessary?

• Are there some things that the paper ought to have addressed?

• Does the writer follow my essay advice?